Sunday, October 12, 2008
The Magic of no Magic
....suddenly the wind picked up
and the world outside of Publix swirled
causing the local crows appear scary
the grasses swayed in a dangerous manner
and I in the middle of it declared to Lidia, that this
was the creative time in the history
of my many trips to this area
I was moved by my Muse
I felt special long after returning home
and waited for something special and nice at the same
time to happen to me.
I am still anticipating it.
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The little poem or a story (whatever u intended to call it) is rather lamely written. U need Editor! Or a writing coach, or just read it aloud to hear how it does not sound good!Or keep up the bad work.
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